you have a good idea a nice concept but the gramar is just so bad it hurts to read.
Shame_less007
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fully agree, i can't make sense of anything in the first few chaps and the caps hurts my brain
ye like i had a literal migrane trying to read this
Marethyue:fully agree, i can't make sense of anything in the first few chaps and the caps hurts my brain
yup
100% agree and the writin feels so rushed