Review Detail of Shadow_king_393 in REINCARTED ANOTHER WORLD CARD USER

thanks for the review

First of all, this guy is trying to ruin you, switching points of view is a rather nitch like for stories and are usually done the way he suggests if there is MULTIPLE main characters. Nitch in otherwords most don’t like it. The point of view changes shouldn’t happen unless its far and in between to show us some development to side characters or hints to what will happen later.

Also be careful not to fall into writing your story more like a journal which many new authors fall into. You can have those as notes if you want but most readers would want the actions written as though it is being seen right then…

And finally, it’s “Reincarnated” not “Reincarted”