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mojag0018
mojag0018Lv152yrmojag0018

to be honest the concept is there. the story should be there too, but your writing quality is terrible. worse than mtl in my opinion which should say something. get an editor. and stop rushing the story

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Shame_less007

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Shame_less007
Shame_less007AuthorShame_less007

thanks for the review bro...I would like to get my story edited after sometime, if you are still interested then you can read at that time

mojag0018
mojag0018Lv15mojag0018

and if you do I will check it out and fix my review [img=recommend]

Shame_less007:thanks for the review bro...I would like to get my story edited after sometime, if you are still interested then you can read at that time
DaoistuIIT19
DaoistuIIT19Lv1DaoistuIIT19

did you edit the story?

Shame_less007:thanks for the review bro...I would like to get my story edited after sometime, if you are still interested then you can read at that time
Shame_less007
Shame_less007AuthorShame_less007

nope.. đŸ˜„

DaoistuIIT19:did you edit the story?
DaoistuIIT19
DaoistuIIT19Lv1DaoistuIIT19

you really have to edit the story. hire a proof reader. when I read last time, i remember the story was really good, one top novel in webnovel. your English is really bad.you have to really fix this. you view count definitely will be 4 times Higher than, now it is.

Shame_less007:nope.. đŸ˜„
JRCaste
JRCasteLv4JRCaste

Author should edit it by now, I've read far enough and I understood somewhat that this would be a hit when you can just fix that problem. really really hope you would because I don't want to see a work that has potential to rival the top works in webnovel and would just get buried by those that originate in english but are bad quality. Novel has everything planted but lacks on one thing, English which has a lot of viewers

Shame_less007:nope.. đŸ˜„
Shame_less007
Shame_less007AuthorShame_less007

I have edited the story using the Grammarly app

JRCaste:Author should edit it by now, I've read far enough and I understood somewhat that this would be a hit when you can just fix that problem. really really hope you would because I don't want to see a work that has potential to rival the top works in webnovel and would just get buried by those that originate in english but are bad quality. Novel has everything planted but lacks on one thing, English which has a lot of viewers
JRCaste
JRCasteLv4JRCaste

GREAT! now I can re-read in peace

Shame_less007:I have edited the story using the Grammarly app