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Lucien121
Lucien121Lv152yrLucien121

its an honest reveiw here so the writting quality is all over the place in the very very beggining but cleared up some by the second chapter if not the second half of the first chapter maybe make it a bit more organized and itd be good now the story progressions is to fast paced your here then there this happened then that it has great potential but at the same time needs to be worked on and touched up here and there and its good to go oh and slow it down some as well and that's about it 4.0 pretty good

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REINCARTED ANOTHER WORLD CARD USER

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Thanks for the review and reading the book....your advice will be taken into consideration...

Lucien121
Lucien121Lv15Lucien121

sorry i was vague i dont like putting the spoiler tags🤣

Shame_less007:Thanks for the review and reading the book....your advice will be taken into consideration...