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mojag0018
mojag0018Lv153yr
2021-08-26 10:10

to be honest the concept is there. the story should be there too, but your writing quality is terrible. worse than mtl in my opinion which should say something. get an editor. and stop rushing the story

REINCARTED ANOTHER WORLD CARD USER

Shame_less007
3.5
352 Chs

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Shame_less007
Shame_less007Author

thanks for the review bro...I would like to get my story edited after sometime, if you are still interested then you can read at that time

3yr
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mojag0018
mojag0018Lv15

and if you do I will check it out and fix my review [img=recommend]

Shame_less007:thanks for the review bro...I would like to get my story edited after sometime, if you are still interested then you can read at that time
3yr
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DaoistuIIT19
DaoistuIIT19Lv1

did you edit the story?

Shame_less007:thanks for the review bro...I would like to get my story edited after sometime, if you are still interested then you can read at that time
2yr
Shame_less007
Shame_less007Author

nope.. 😥

DaoistuIIT19:did you edit the story?
2yr
DaoistuIIT19
DaoistuIIT19Lv1

you really have to edit the story. hire a proof reader. when I read last time, i remember the story was really good, one top novel in webnovel. your English is really bad.you have to really fix this. you view count definitely will be 4 times Higher than, now it is.

Shame_less007:nope.. 😥
2yr
1
JRCaste
JRCasteLv4

Author should edit it by now, I've read far enough and I understood somewhat that this would be a hit when you can just fix that problem. really really hope you would because I don't want to see a work that has potential to rival the top works in webnovel and would just get buried by those that originate in english but are bad quality. Novel has everything planted but lacks on one thing, English which has a lot of viewers

Shame_less007:nope.. 😥
2yr
Shame_less007
Shame_less007Author

I have edited the story using the Grammarly app

JRCaste:Author should edit it by now, I've read far enough and I understood somewhat that this would be a hit when you can just fix that problem. really really hope you would because I don't want to see a work that has potential to rival the top works in webnovel and would just get buried by those that originate in english but are bad quality. Novel has everything planted but lacks on one thing, English which has a lot of viewers
2yr
1
JRCaste
JRCasteLv4

GREAT! now I can re-read in peace

Shame_less007:I have edited the story using the Grammarly app
2yr
josue_negron
josue_negronLv15

been 3yrs and I had to eat a whole canabis gummies to let the story flow since the story still won't feel right anyway

Shame_less007:thanks for the review bro...I would like to get my story edited after sometime, if you are still interested then you can read at that time
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Mushroom_kingLv3

you have a good idea a nice concept but the gramar is just so bad it hurts to read.

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BierbartLv14

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JJ_PrakosoLv1

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Man_of_culture
Man_of_cultureLv4

A good idea, but bad execution. The author said he uses "Grammarly" but it is still almost unreadable, or just a headache to read. Maybe he improved over time, but I just can´t bring myself to sit down and read more than 10 chapters. Author, if you read this, I recommend you rewrite the first few chapters to iron out all the mistakes, or just ask a friend/editor to proofread it for you,

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DarkPrince
DarkPrinceLv13

you know, even after this much bad reviews I still see hope In this story, I will support you, keep up the good work, as you can only learn more by trying harder...

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Marethyue
MarethyueLv3

ok, for real, the writing quality sucks. i can't understand anything and im used to reading machine translated stuff. not recommended, but if the chapters were revised from the beginning it could be a pretty decent novel

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Rahul_Charan_9446
Rahul_Charan_9446Lv4

hero is op... this is most basic thing I want.and good friends/teammates +harem too and dungeons and monsters and what not. I haven't seen whole book. only up to 65+ chap. but I didn't see any reason to not continue this novel. anyone reading this review to whether or not read this book. I recommend to try atleast 30+ chapters

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Sadast
SadastLv15

the grammar kills this. the concept may be good. to be honest I'm not sure what the heck was really happening due to how bad the grammar was

2yr
Shadow_king_393
Shadow_king_393Lv4

I feel this is your first so an advice use 3rd person point of view 2. keep changing point view from him to another person but so far you did avery good job 👏👍

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