I love this story. the grammar can be bad sometimes but its readable. Ruby in this book seems to like pushing people away. Which is fine because its not cannon ruby so obviously their not going to act the same. I just hope she changes over time. Though i do like the way she is treating Onyx the wannabe mary sue. So i guess just keep doing what you're doing and i hope this story keeps going and gets even better!
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