Review Detail of KingCristo in THE FLOWER OF THE KINGDOM

To start off this review. In all honesty the world background, the characters description of who they are, that being followed by detail is actually rather nice. The story premise is interesting and gives a sort of game of thrones inspired vib. I'd say the one criticism I have over this is the writing quality. Sometimes the reader gets lost through the grammatical errors and spelling errors. Just a quick suggestion is to read through your work before posting it. Gramma and spelling is the first thing a reader sees when starting off, take your time, and enjoy correcting your mistakes. Besides that I believe this story has potential, just check through your work.