Item: The Rise Of A Tribal Deadbeat
Rating: 5
Author: AkshatArpit

AkshatArpitAuthor3yr

2021-09-03 23:47

Author here! Now that the contest is over and I didn't win (bummer) I wanted to make a few things clear. 1. I'm not dropping the story. So don't worry about it. 2. The story will be free to read till November so feel free to vote for it till then. 3. Now coming back to the story. The start of the story is slow-paced. Maybe too slow-paced for a few people. 4. Since I focused more on world-building more, the system only appears in chapter 18. If you have questions feel free to drop them as a reply to this review. And lastly, Thanks for reading!

The Rise Of A Tribal Deadbeat

AkshatArpit

4.5

89 Chs

Liked by 24 people

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Gud_NeighbourLv14

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3yr

Guan_YuLv1

romance? harem? hate harem like romance

3yr

AkshatArpitAuthor

no harem, maybe a bit of romance later

Guan_Yu:romance? harem? hate harem like romance

3yr

Guan_YuLv1

awesome imma give it a try

3yr

SHADOWBLADELv13

Ever heard of Rise of a Deadbeat Noble? It's a good manhwa. So I am gonna read this and see if this is also that good.

2yr

AkshatArpitAuthor

The title of this novel was inspired from that. lol. Hope you'll like this as well!

SHADOWBLADE:Ever heard of Rise of a Deadbeat Noble? It's a good manhwa. So I am gonna read this and see if this is also that good.

2yr

Kaneki_ken_5565Lv15

I'm excited to see how this story ends up, can't wait for more!

2yr

AkshatArpitAuthor

Thanks for reading!!!

Kaneki_ken_5565:I'm excited to see how this story ends up, can't wait for more!

2yr

0THeunkown0Lv4

isss theee Mc evil type ,r anti hero type,?

AkshatArpit:Thanks for reading!!!

2yr

AkshatArpitAuthor

somewhere in between. 🤔

0THeunkown0:isss theee Mc evil type ,r anti hero type,?

2yr

0THeunkown0Lv4

AkshatArpit:somewhere in between. 🤔

2yr

csd1Lv13

Is there ntr?

2yr

AkshatArpitAuthor

nope

csd1:Is there ntr?

2yr

AkshatArpitAuthor

Ask away! I'd be happy to help

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2yr

AkshatArpitAuthor

No harem and no mercy towards anyone, female or not.

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2yr

MILARCHLv13

children?

AkshatArpit:No harem and no mercy towards anyone, female or not.

2yr

AkshatArpitAuthor

mc is a child (15-16) himself so no

MILARCH:children?

2yr

MILARCHLv13

thanks

AkshatArpit:mc is a child (15-16) himself so no

2yr

ARCHSON_KELv1

Cant wait to read till the last page of this book.

2yr

TheDungeonChefLv14

come back to us.

2yr

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I love how its playing out so far as well as the development of the character and the people around them. Its alos extraordinary how it play out with how he is seen or treated by those around him and how the outside world and sub character background. ⊂_ヽ　＼＼　　＼( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) 　　　 >　⌒ヽ　　　/　へ＼　　 /　　/　＼＼　　ﾚ　ノ　　ヽ_つ　　/　/ 　 /　/| 　(　(ヽ　|　|、＼　| 丿＼ ⌒) 　| |　　) / ノ )　　Lﾉ (_／

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Another story from my brother (Not by blood haha). Either way, I have only read up to chap 45, and so far, it is one of the best pieces I have ever read from him (Apart from the rise of a porter). I hope he finds even more success than he has before. Al the best brother!

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This novel has a lot of potential. I hope you don't give it up.update it more often.[img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update]

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really gooooooood, just that the problem lie with the author inability to finish this marvelous work,which was a bad ideas since it got me drooling over for more chapters for a very longggggggggggggg time🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐

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I remember the Rise of the porter, during that time Author was still new, but after reading this, author level has gone from lvl 6 to lv10 (max). He has grown so much. This novel is a hidden gem

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The novel started good. The beginning and the synopsis seemed like it would be a cliche but it turned out alright Last stopped at chapter 46 The novel went alright but what can a system novel be without females around the MC. The random cave female. She just happened to go to or be in the cave that just opened Less than an hour ago. And it opened in the same region the MC just happened to be the only one training in. Mind you, she is weak and is a burden In the cave that they were in, Thwy just so happened to meet a strong female spirit that is much stronger than the MC but has no evil motives. At the same time, She happens to know the Mc system. Sure it can be explained with prophecy. But then that would mean that the priestess of his own tribe would know about it as well. And as he was walking deeper into the cave. He already mentioned that monsters don’t usually go in. And the monsters deeper inside won’t go out of the cave. So it stands to reason that the first cave should be quite safe. But shocker that isn’t a shocker, He brings the deadweight with him and lo & behold, she gets blessed by the super strong female so she isn’t a total deadweight only a simple deadweight. I just stopped around there. Feels like

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Need more. Enjoying the character and story development. Please and thank you! Great story thus far. As someone of indigenous descent. Overly happy to see a story that is more ''native'' based.

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