Review Detail of Porthos10 in Saharan Successor

I don't find any default except the fact that at the beginning it's a slow slow pace story but the clever author ask us about what to change we respond to him and he has started to shift his writing way. the best fic I have read on this platform because it so detailed so well written that you can think you read an original fiction and not a "fanfiction". even if my review don't sell this story to you I think you should try to read this. sorry for the grammar and the mistakes I'm not native.