Review Detail of TingGoSkraa in Anime Multiverse Dimensional Chat Group

I really like the story idea, but the grammar needs a lot of work. There are some points where it just hurts to keep reading because the character interactions just felt so fake. Also the whole volleyball portion makes no sense because Miyamura goes to Katagiri not Karasuno. Even if they aren’t rival schools, nobody is going to let a random high schooler join their practices, even if he says he is Hinata’s “friend” after meeting him for the first time the day before. I tried to ignore the bad parts because I really want to enjoy the story, but I really cannot with all of these problems.