Review Detail of Rudranarayan_Nanda in thrown into naruto (Up for adoption)

Well I seriously don't like the story.first of all author is so lazy to write the story that it feels lifeless. Second almost in all the naruto fan fics mc will get gamer system and will use his bonus points in body attributes instead of increasing chakra which is the base of all things in nija world.and same happened in this story. And author seriously lack knowledge about ninjutsu. And there is no point in joining any of main characters group.and he has a gamer system as his cheat but still need bloodline powers.and seriously substitution jutsu is not about swap place with others it's about showing that you are there while you really is not there by creating ellusion.