This is one of the best magic based webnovel I have read till now. Let's start with writing quality. The writing quality is good. There are a few spelling errors, but they are corrected after some time. The story is consistent and the stats, etc are all carefully calculated Story development. the story development is good and gets better as it progresses. After the first few chapters, the story developes naturally and consistently. Character design. there are only a few characters until now, but they are designed nicely and due to there only being few chapters, I'll have to wait till there are more for details the updating stability and world background are also praiseworthy If you are looking for a magic based webnovel with a new and good plot, I highly suggest you read this book for a few chapters before deciding.

So far the story is great! It's an interesting mixture of few genres. The plot is intriguing, your characters are expressive, and from the beginning, you tried to show the background world. Well done!

This is a very good book. The way you started the novel got me hooked. I loved the fact that there was no needless narration. I had to take my time to read this novel and it really proved its worth

Wow this book is so amazing and the writing style deserves a standing ovation . Am not really into system but this is a system worth reading. Author you are very talented, your first novel is a great one . I totally recommend it.

OOOOOH ! I LOVE it ! at first i don't like system very much, because the authors usually have a bad still description, or lack of good back story/background, BUT this novel is prefect! Writing quality, story development, character design and the back story. I was hocked since the first line "What curse is this! Even after transmigrating, I have to die at my nineteenth birthday for the second time." Highly recommendation keep going

Writing quality: Perfect, dialogues on point and the story is consistent, and the detailing is not much there in the story which is a plus point. Story development: The flow of the story is medium-paced and gets better as it progresses. Character design/ updating/ world background: the characters are well portrayed and can be visualized by them which reading it. Updating and world background is exquisite and praiseworthy. My thoughts: good read and best magic novel I've read so far...can't wait to read more and how the story progresses further...highly recommended!!! Keep up the good work, author!!!

Not gonna lie, I wasn't expecting much read the fire three chapters and I'm hooked. You might have found a new fan :) Also, I feel for the MC, lol.