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Misstook
MisstookLv32yr
2022-02-17 06:26

Im in chapter 67 now so idk if it's still early to write this review or not. Im kinda an extreme person so i dont think my view will change any time soon regarding the ML Fang. I mean I understand that he has PTSD so his actions till now. But I think that has become an excuse for him to hurt Ren repeatedly without caring knowing that Rrn will come coax him afterward (you can notice that from his monologue). I felt especially frustrated and equally disgusted when he was the one who suggested to broke up but deep down still expect Ren to come cajole him(?); more so he still has the cheeks to question if Ren has left him when Wolf told him that he's not coming back anytime soon. I dont care if he's actions are unintentional or not, the damage is already done to Ren. What pains me more that the people around the mc and ml mostly side with the ML in so many things even if he qas at fault. Mental illness is no excuse for this siding. I know a lot of people with severe paychological issues and mental illness but at least they still -even if it just little- pay attention to other people emotions and they know it when they hurt others, but here otherwise the ml is extremly oblivious to that, all he care about is himself. I have a lot to say and complain about when it comes to Fang but I guess i'll stop here. I hope the author will make some development to his character.

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Misstook
MisstookLv3

Ayyye I guess i'll keep going my chest feel so blocked now and the only way to feel better is to tell what i think. In that episode od ten bucks and 1 billion, I bet if Ren gave him something that equal ten bucks he would be happy but at the same time im pretty sure he will start thinking doea he not want me anymore? am i not important ro him now as i used to be? is he fed up with me? and the likes. A healthy relationship needs both parties to give and make concessions but the only one i see doing that is Ren while Fang is just whining all the time and playing miserable all the time. And isdk why Ren fell in love with him till now. Is it bc he's the ml? After all that's his only redeeming quality. I guess this is a low key toxic relationship.

PerduEnHiver
PerduEnHiverLv13

Je suis totalement d'accord avec tes propos. Déjà au 20 chapitre sont attitude se montrent il est égoïste il prend la bonté pour aqui et quand il est en faut c'est toujours l'autre qui prend. C'est dégoûtant.

Shiny_Virgo
Shiny_VirgoLv13

Actually this was my reaction before the character development for sure... but please hang on a little more and you will be more understanding of the circumstances that takes place for both the MC and ML. I know it'll be hard for reader to see our dear MC suffering from ML's insecurity and negative feelings, but what happened in the past surely takes more damage in our ML pysche that we can imagine considering 'it' when our ML have no emotional or physical support system at all. We must know that they both need time and lots of understanding to make the their relationship works and thats what i felt when I read their arguments over small things like monetary assets which they have different opinions about. I really felt frustate when arguments take place but I felt relived they both have arguments which their feelings being displayed for each other. I absolutely sure neither of them wants to hurt each other intentionaly or not. It just takes more time to cultivate their feeling towards each other and thats what we called 'progress' right? So dear readers, be patient towards our couple ok? Remember... our MC and ML is just a human beings :) they both have feelings and brain ofc so the progress is def there :3 After all, our ML is still in the year with hormones at their peak (just a 18 y.o little guy) and also with very little understanding about being a couple (romance thingy ^×^) 🤠 no offence btw 🤠

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