The story is good but I feel like I have an issue with the way Kevin is trusting Axel in the beginning, it seems far-fetched to me because Kevin was a former assassin who was hunted for a long time and it seems fair to me that he would have developed some trust issues because we are told that every time he thought he was safe he'd get attacked. But all in all the story has great potential.
CeliaNaya
Liked it!
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