badly done synopsis tells us more about how he died than the entire story so far, the mc can somehow use a room that shows virtual reality in that world as proof that he is from another world because his sister? designed it. this was so poorly thought out that I do not recommend readesing like ever
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LIKEI know and my review was based off of that fact. you didn't give enough background to anything to a large enough extent for the story to make much sense or be very good. and honestly the only character that was decent you killed off. hope your next volume will make people want to read it more than this did
J0kerJ0estar:Thank you for your feedback! I'm not sure if you know but this is just volume 1 of the story, and the whole thing is not yet finished.