First thing first, I like the plot and I'm obsessed... The inside chapters is kinda informative like how magic or powers work. Overall there are mistakes, if I'll be honest, there are mistakes, like typo's that can be fix using grammarly. But the story is amazing, I love the whole level up character and disciple thing, it kinda shine the story, keep up!
Kateki
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