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the story is rather disappointing, for the moment nothing has happened mc has only spent a few days and has not checked or seen the internet to find out about the world and there is little or almost no knowledge about what the world is like, mc is flat and not has almost no interaction with anyone or innovative ideas. the writing is ok, the stability is random and the chapters are too short (calling them chapters is too much), mc is flat and little is known about him and the body, he was killed with knife and break bonus instead of getting angry or anything else nothing happens he is like an adult with a child's mind because he says he likes to help people because he grew up with superheroes, mc having been killed with knife cuts and fractured bones should be tortured and already so I think that mc is not a good person then with the deepening of the story it becomes more confusing. the world is supposed to be dc but for the moment nothing has been shown. Sorry english isnt my first leanguage and i use GT

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Dc: Paradox

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Thanks for your review. I appreciate that you took the time to write a review even though English isn't your first language. Maybe it got lost in the translations but the mc was never fully an adult. He also did check the internet, almost the first thing he did. I'm aware the chapters are short but I write slow so I figured that if the chapters are short I could release more often.