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Ahmed_Mustafa_0951
Ahmed_Mustafa_0951Lv12yrAhmed_Mustafa_0951

....................................................................................................................................need to work on your sentences, proofreading n not using english names in a naruto fanfic

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Heir of the otsutsuki

Hellish_Rabbit

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Hellish_Rabbit
Hellish_RabbitAuthorHellish_Rabbit

I will use whatever I want in my fanfiction, However, to read or not is your choice.

Pythia
PythiaLv2Pythia

I mean true but naming someone idk timothy Senju is really stupid in a world of Japanese names

Hellish_Rabbit:I will use whatever I want in my fanfiction, However, to read or not is your choice.
Afonso_Aaron
Afonso_AaronLv5Afonso_Aaron

Hey there author i want to know how big the hárèm is going to be in your Harry Potter fic ?

Hellish_Rabbit:I will use whatever I want in my fanfiction, However, to read or not is your choice.
Hellish_Rabbit
Hellish_RabbitAuthorHellish_Rabbit

There will be none =(

Afonso_Aaron:Hey there author i want to know how big the hárèm is going to be in your Harry Potter fic ?
Afonso_Aaron
Afonso_AaronLv5Afonso_Aaron

So why is there a hárèm tag ?

Hellish_Rabbit:There will be none =(
Entyt
EntytLv1Entyt

Dude, your comment cracked me up

Afonso_Aaron:So why is there a hárèm tag ?