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Hellish_Rabbit
Hellish_RabbitAuthor2yrHellish_Rabbit

Shamelessness is the second happiness ^^ I will continue writing this story and not going to drop it for sure. But since this is my first work, it is rather difficult to write it.

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Heir of the otsutsuki

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AzraelAzazoth
AzraelAzazothLv2AzraelAzazoth

it is its romance when it's 1 girl when it's more than that it's harem

God_of_hentai:i dont count 2 wifes as a harem cuz well its just a thruple not a harem
IlIlIlIlIl
IlIlIlIlIlLv3IlIlIlIlIl

then what is the first

RuberDF
RuberDFLv5RuberDF

so, out of curiosity, is Kaguya gonna be the MC lover?

Hellish_Rabbit
Hellish_RabbitAuthorHellish_Rabbit

I like the idea

RuberDF:so, out of curiosity, is Kaguya gonna be the MC lover?
Donovan_Mullin
Donovan_MullinLv4Donovan_Mullin

Good premise bad execution

DragoPackMan
DragoPackManLv4DragoPackMan

this is good if you can patch up some inconsistencies e.g.. mc disappeared for 4 years and he talks about sasuke 3 year old flashback. but now, sasuke is 5 years old.

18484746
18484746Lv418484746

Pla dont make the mc be narutos babysitter

Azathoth2
Azathoth2Lv4Azathoth2

is this going to be a harem?? And please no

Hellish_Rabbit
Hellish_RabbitAuthorHellish_Rabbit

Not big fun of harems with 5 million wifes lol Maybe 2-3 girls but not harem. Yup.

Azathoth2:is this going to be a harem?? And please no
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Lycarus
LycarusLv2Lycarus

You should know that having 2 wives is already considered harem. if you are really going to do this let me know? I don't like to read harem.

Hellish_Rabbit:Not big fun of harems with 5 million wifes lol Maybe 2-3 girls but not harem. Yup.
AzraelAzazoth
AzraelAzazothLv2AzraelAzazoth

me too just stick with one wife at least😒

Lycarus:You should know that having 2 wives is already considered harem. if you are really going to do this let me know? I don't like to read harem.
God_of_hentai
God_of_hentaiLv14God_of_hentai

yo a harem is technically 2 or more but are you really gonna truck-kuning drop this over something this small yall need to grow the truck-kun up dam

AzraelAzazoth:me too just stick with one wife at least😒
AzraelAzazoth
AzraelAzazothLv2AzraelAzazoth

I know a HAREM is 2 and more it just gets annoying with harems over time

God_of_hentai:yo a harem is technically 2 or more but are you really gonna truck-kuning drop this over something this small yall need to grow the truck-kun up dam
Yui_Kitsuki
Yui_KitsukiLv3Yui_Kitsuki

no harem pls

God_of_hentai
God_of_hentaiLv14God_of_hentai

while i said 2 i meant to put 3

God_of_hentai:yo a harem is technically 2 or more but are you really gonna truck-kuning drop this over something this small yall need to grow the truck-kun up dam
God_of_hentai
God_of_hentaiLv14God_of_hentai

i dont count 2 wifes as a harem cuz well its just a thruple not a harem

AzraelAzazoth:I know a HAREM is 2 and more it just gets annoying with harems over time
God_of_hentai
God_of_hentaiLv14God_of_hentai

sorry not harem its a thruple

AzraelAzazoth:it is its romance when it's 1 girl when it's more than that it's harem
AzraelAzazoth
AzraelAzazothLv2AzraelAzazoth

it's harem just except it bruh not to mention it makes no difference to the fic in anyway

God_of_hentai:sorry not harem its a thruple
Oji_san_ecchi
Oji_san_ecchiLv4Oji_san_ecchi

wife MC 1. Tsunade 2. Kushina 3. Kaguya Please!!

Hellish_Rabbit:Not big fun of harems with 5 million wifes lol Maybe 2-3 girls but not harem. Yup.