Review Detail of Paulo_D_Manoel in Martial Arts System
Review detail
man,this story is kinda stupid,the people in this are not believable, I got a couple of laughs here and there,but the world building doesn't make sense.
Martial Arts System
Alekzi
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Paulo_D_ManoelLv11Paulo_D_Manoel
the world building is all over the place, can't tell for sure, to much time has passed when I read it.
Highspirit25:Why would say that Then tell us what is wrong with the story please