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Review Detail of Xudima in Martial Arts System

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Xudima
XudimaLv22yrXudima

The story is pretty cool. If I had to point out one problem, it would be the fact that the dialogue between the characters are a lil bit forced, but it's alright... also please give more updates the cliffhangers are literally causing me immense mental, physical, and astral pain.

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Martial Arts System

Alekzi

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Alekzi
AlekziAuthorAlekzi

Thanks for feedback, I think I succeeded making the dialoguea more real, I agree that it was quite rough in first dozen chapters, so I completely agree with you