Review Detail of Peacemaker2_at_ in Daughter Of The Senju
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I only read the description, but I can say that you broke the entirety of Naruto by saying that there are no Zetsu and bad Danzo. Congratulations my man, you broke it in one sentence. I do not know how you can even think of doing something so dumb, and how you can imagine a Plot for such a world. It's like removing cars from Forza. Doesn't work.
Daughter Of The Senju
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Plus, am I supposed to whisper a not so silent whisper to refute, and say there will be a Zetsu when I said no Zetsu, or that there was a Zetsu and he’s no more but of course nobody knew, or that Zetsu lost his memory (like a Kdrama), or that he just doesn’t exist? No matter the plot line, I firstly have no obligation to be a transparent writer. If that’s what any reader wants, all authors should just cease writing and post bulletpoints of major plotlines up till the next generation now. Like those 15 minute movie review or summary on youtube, major plotlines stated without the need to watch the 2 hour movie. All fanfics should stop, headcannons will take over. If some writers are like that, go ahead.
thelazybunny:…? Yes, no Zetsu. But am I supposed to list down every probable future villian in the summary like a fruitless game walkthrough? I think not. Plus, it’s not like Zetsu birthed the Ōtsutsuki or something. Zetsu is not cars, in my opinion. Zetsu is the fradulent car salesman that sells you a Rolls.R Ghost with inauthentic interior and skeleton frame, and I’m fine with removing that guy.image
…? Yes, no Zetsu. But am I supposed to list down every probable future villian in the summary like a fruitless game walkthrough? I think not. Plus, it’s not like Zetsu birthed the Ōtsutsuki or something. Zetsu is not cars, in my opinion. Zetsu is the fradulent car salesman that sells you a Rolls.R Ghost with inauthentic interior and skeleton frame, and I’m fine with removing that guy.
I completely forgot I commented on this. I also think you missed my point, but I can't be bothered to care cause I just saw this really bad Fanfiction that makes me cringe. Also, sry if I seemed aggressive, but I commented on this during a stressful time.
thelazybunny:…? Yes, no Zetsu. But am I supposed to list down every probable future villian in the summary like a fruitless game walkthrough? I think not. Plus, it’s not like Zetsu birthed the Ōtsutsuki or something. Zetsu is not cars, in my opinion. Zetsu is the fradulent car salesman that sells you a Rolls.R Ghost with inauthentic interior and skeleton frame, and I’m fine with removing that guy.image
Ok, I read this till the end afterward. You commented during stressful times. Yeah, I can relate to that. I hereby let you use that username once more.
Peacemaker2_at_:I completely forgot I commented on this. I also think you missed my point, but I can't be bothered to care cause I just saw this really bad Fanfiction that makes me cringe. Also, sry if I seemed aggressive, but I commented on this during a stressful time.