Review Detail of rocketwind2 in Legacy Firing

okay, people who say that writing quality is awsome i must ask how can you think that? the story seems great but the writing can be so confusing at times. like he was fighting two goblins and they both jumped at him the first one he grabbed and he was moving around wildly then so the second one lessened not lost lessened it's grip because at some point it grabbed him then it says that the second goblin also jumped at him like what? there are more things but it's not worth writing any more of them if for some reason decide to read this then you will notice them. And I will say I could let this slide if the writer was not a native speaker but he is so I can't let it slide