Review Detail of Wkoya in Ravens of Eternity

Just started reading, overall good work. I don't really see the reason behind the game aspect of it though. As far as I can tell it doesn't seem to have a purpose except to connect to a larger audience. As well as the main character going into detail about stuff a game would usually not have. This opinion may change later on, we will see. If it doesn't I'll just pretend it has nothing to do with a game. I like the attention to detail, and how most of the technology has an explanation behind it, instead of saying "it was very advanced technology." The main character seems trope heavy but interesting nonetheless. Keep up the good work.