Okay, so this is purely my opinion. Anyways, I'm trying to remember or summarize this story based from my understanding. Summary: Ice Queen Ami dies, Truck-kun style(and golf too hehe..), and the god(dess??) that killed her gave her another chance to live, but in a different world. Writing quality: I can spot a some punctuation errors, and grammatical errors. The English is better than good though. Story Development: A decent pace, I gotta say. A little girl trying to learn her new surroundings, and by that we are also trying to know the new world she lives in. Listing one like the impact of the "important" characters around her, even in subtle or little details. (You get it, just shortened it cause I don't want to reach 1k words of this) World Background: I'd say it's great! There's nothing more I can say since I will really spoil too much. Character Design: I don't have a strong imaginations, but their character designs are good and simple; just the way I like them. Updating Stability: I suppose it's consistent.
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