Review Detail of BurningOcean in No Ego
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For a guy that doesn't typically speak English, Parmesan is quite good with keeping his grammar and spelling in check. The way he writes ' The Boy ' and ' The Girl ' makes them feel realistic. Especially with their strange, socially awkward relationship. The characters stay true to how they are presented and are relevant to the setting and not just some one off never going to see again baddie or side character. World building is attempted to say the least, but besides the psychic evolution thing, the world around the main cast is basically a pseudo-Japan. As for the Yandere aspect, you the one that drew everyone here. They are all unique in there own ways. Especially for a book that has less than fifty chapters. Oh, and if you are here for the yanderes to just slightly obsessed girlfriends, LEAVE. This book explores the more darker tones of yanderes, such as rape, kidnapping, and emotional manipulation. If looked at realistically, they are emotionally damaged people so expect some scary shit! But if you are here for the good characters, and darker undertones. Pull up a chair grab, a snack, and don't feed the yanderes. They bite.
No Ego
Parmesan
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OH BOY OH BOY OH BOY MY FIRST REVIEW!!!! THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THE HONEST FEEDBACKS!!! I really like the concept of yandere, but the thing is most people tend to turn yandere into possessive girlfriends. After reading many books that share the same tag, I felt like I would want to build the killer from the ground up. Personally, I think yanderes should be ready to capture and kill at any given time. But this takes time. I do not think anyone can be "hey you are a yandere, act like it at omce", there should be some sort of growth. So expect the worst to come. My girls are NOT here to play house. I'm Vietnamese by the way, so my mothertongue is obviously Vietnamese. I am learning Japanese but it is really slow at this point.