Review Detail of Tangerqueen in NOW LICENSED UNDER POPINK

Wait this was such a cute story 0.0 Writing Quality (4.5/5): Everything is easy to understand. And while there are issues with compound sentences (there should be a comma before and if it connects two independent sentences) as well as with tenses, I just wanted to pump this up to a 5 because of how much I enjoyed the story. Story Development (5/5): I love how easy the plot is to read! But saying that, I just wanted to say that it was definitely a page turner ^-^ There's pretty speedy developments that keep you on the tip of your toes, but it's not fast to the point where you're going like what did I miss Character Design (5/5): Ahahah my favorite part tbh. Each and every one of them is so distinct, and I love how their actions (subtle ones too) and their dialogues reflect that. I think my favorite is Rain but shhh World Background (5/5): Realistic yet fantasy-like, the perfect combo Good luck with the story, and I'll wait for the new updates ^-^ I think it has a place to stay in my library