Great story so far and I like the character choice of Mc. Only real issue i have is your power system the way the numbers are written it just doesnt seem to flow or make sense especially with how ambitious your planning on making this story with 5 worlds. so i would tone down on technique costs and rework numbers of the different stats so it makes better sense in long run.
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LIKERagingCloud405:I'm planning for the next world to be significantly stronger than the naruto world. Like I'm talking not even top tiers being continental to multi continental. With top tiers being star level. After that, she might end up in dragon ball. And then DC/Marvel.
I was thinking more DXD. I feel that their are kinda not a lot of High Tiers in the canon wormverse. Except the Triumerate and scion most of the others could die with like sniper fire. Although if you have an idea I will honestly think about it.
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