I have no idea what anyone sees in this and why everyone gives it 5 star reviews...It's simply not that good, so from the point of me, one of the most heated fans of Naruto universe that has played every naruto game, be it pc, playstation, psp, watched all of Naruto, Naruto Shippuden and i'm caught up in Boruto, Naruto movies, specials, one shots, read both manga and Naruto Shinden Books, I dare to say I'm familiar and most certainly qualified to judge the story and the personalities of each and every single character that has some sort of value in the show and characters I grew up with. To me, it seems like the original author only wanted to disrespect the Naruto world on a grand scale by writing something as terrible as this. I don't usually review anything, mostly because I have no time to read anything anymore, as I'm writing myself and have a stable job. But a friend mentioned this fanfiction in the passing conversations and so I gave it a try, and after reading through it ( I'm currently at chapter 30.) I don't think I've ever read a worse fanfiction of Naruto character wise. Even fanfics on Wattpad could post something better with their favorite Y/N and second person style, than this piece of... And I have to say...I had enough…of reading this… As there is barely anything I liked about this, let's begin with things I disliked. 99% of characters were out of their Character. Itachi sneering and cursing in his mind like some chinese master. Tsunade bawling her eyes out for no reason in like three chapters, when she cried like twice in the entirety of both shows...and this one got me, a young 8-9 old Choji saying he will get revenge for his father, I think I got migraine reading that chapter...The only person in his Character would be Naruto or Pain, but even Pain lost his character after a few chapters... You can tell a Chinese person made it just from reading one chapter. Full of terrible writing, character portraying, women shaming and other things. The author doesn't have enough knowledge on many events, switching things up by a whole lot, especially dates and years...A lot of numbers don't make sense, so yeah... The only appearance of Killer B, one of my most favorite characters of any anime till this day, was showered with curses, instead of actual rap songs or funny quirky rhymes that should have followed. I lost all hope in this fanfic after that. Every citizen mentioned or any of their lines feel like something a basic, no brain, chinese citizen and young master of every generic Wuxia novel would say, it's actually hard to read this… Author made Ohnoki, look worse than Danzo somehow, and even raikage was acting as if he was about to NTR the whole village of Konoha at any moment... Basically two chapters of Deidara just acting like a 0 iq person for whatever reason, I guess word count? No other explanation… Deidara isn't a bootlicker. Deidara is a narcissist that believes he is the best at art, and that he should be the mightiest around. He even dared to attack Itachi when they recruited him. He wasn't afraid of him at all. He wouldn't bootlick their leader, even if he was cornered. The mc whose existence is barren throughout the fic, is a huge, huge, huuuuge as people in the comments section called it S*MP. We can all agree that the reason Konan is on the cover of this fic is because mc wants to do her badly. As other wise people mentioned in the paragraph comments, MC acts as if he was a Twitch Chat viewer S*mp, sending his tier 3 sub to the woman in question for no other reason than to gain her favor, (which he hopefully won't in the upcoming future and i'm hoping she would get together with Nagato…Because I don't see someone like Konan act so out of place, but then again it's a fanfic! Changing characters' personalities is given, no? lul) Anyway, im very disappointed with mc. Instead of getting stronger himself, he wants to give his rewards to a woman that doesn't even know he exists! If that isn't pathetic, idk what is. As the mc is forgotten, you might as well rename the fic to Naruto characters react to Naruto. Would be more fitting. Writing Quality - Repetitive sentences pretty much every chapter. Annoying cursing which makes the story less enjoyable to read. Character personalities are all over the place, a lot of things were missed, or do not fit as the author probably didn't read much of Naruto and just skimmed a bit of info from the Wiki and made a terrible fic by combining Chinese traits with it. 1 Stars out of 5 Stars Stability of updates - Pretty much every day. Translators are for translating after all, although in the future, I wouldn't pick a story like this to translate. It's not worth your time, honestly... 5 Stars out of 5 Stars Story development - Characters react to themselves, mc does nothing. Not much is happening. 2 Stars out of 5 Stars Character design - nothing new, we barely got to hear what mc even looks like and he doesn't show up almost at all. 1 Stars out of 5 Stars World background - Naruto world. Nothing new. 1 Stars out of 5 Stars Pros Sometimes funny. Finding characters in a unique situation can be funny for sure. Alright Grammar which is surprising on Webnovel but then again, that's on translators and not the original author who I can only presume to be around twelve years of age and no less... Cons Personality wise, there isn't a single character other than maybe Naruto that acts in part with the original. You dare disrespect this and that Chinese syndrome. Objectifying women/making women seem more frail than they actually are, when they are trained shinobis. Tsunade cried at most twice in all of Naruto. After Naruto almost died and then when Jiraya died. She was a Sannin, the best Kunoichi of konoha. Excessive, excessive, excessive amount of cursing in both sentences and in mind. You won't find 98% of characters curse like that in Naruto. Again, failed attempt to be funny, but as jokes and fun are subjective, I guess it's not that bad, although I admire Chinese for not cringing through this. I have studied Chinese for some time, and I checked the raws and found out quite a few mistakes or changes that were made which I do not agree with but I shall not comment on that any further. Sasuke fainted twice in a row, Kakashi and Danzo almost fainted as well...Hello? Is there a shinobi disease that makes everyone faint? A new addition to the story? The only way the author can describe shock would be through “Pin dropping needle” or whatever, hearing this sentence three times in three chapters can be annoying. If you want to read a similar story, check out I Really Am A Superstar. It has everything this novel has to offer, other than Naruto characters of course. But then again, this fic also doesn't have naruto characters, as they are surely Naruto characters from a different dimension where their personalities were mixed and changed. Terrible Fanfiction belongs to the ranch and deleting the review won't help you.
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LIKEthis fic was never there for the plot, it's just a crack fic trying to br comedic. that's it. and don't compare a fanfic with iras. that's a masterpiece. if you went in hoping to see iras level comedy, you were bound to be disappointed. no fanfic ever could come close to iras. but if you can give any other example based on comedy naruto fanfic, do that. As for the rest, except for translation, nothing is under my control. and regarding that, you said we changed a few things which you didn't like. dude, i am pretty sure something's wrong with you if you liked the original part because the author has written some pretty bad stuff. and that is the only thing we omitted in this translation. also, last thing, don't comment about deleting the review. you're victimising yourself and showing that we usually delete review. well, no. we have never deleted review unless they contained threats. also the review gets autodeleted by wn if you use banned words, even if it's in the comments by other users (though that rarely happens.)
I have noticed later that words like S*mp are also banned for some reason, therefore figured out it was probably automatically deleted. I have experienced my reviews being deleted numerous times on purpose although not by you specifically. You know, I only mentioned Iras because in description it says the funniest Naruto fic I will witness in my lifetime so I admit I might have had some expectations.
BingeFics:this fic was never there for the plot, it's just a crack fic trying to br comedic. that's it. and don't compare a fanfic with iras. that's a masterpiece. if you went in hoping to see iras level comedy, you were bound to be disappointed. no fanfic ever could come close to iras. but if you can give any other example based on comedy naruto fanfic, do that. As for the rest, except for translation, nothing is under my control. and regarding that, you said we changed a few things which you didn't like. dude, i am pretty sure something's wrong with you if you liked the original part because the author has written some pretty bad stuff. and that is the only thing we omitted in this translation. also, last thing, don't comment about deleting the review. you're victimising yourself and showing that we usually delete review. well, no. we have never deleted review unless they contained threats. also the review gets autodeleted by wn if you use banned words, even if it's in the comments by other users (though that rarely happens.)
Taste differs from person to person, I said what I had in mind. No point talking about it any further.
Dretno:Man you really don't have any taste....
the reviews on this site have always been strange because everything gets a five-star review regardless how bad it is. it also seems the way the algorithm sorts the reviews the bad reviews are push to the bottom while the good reviews are pushed to the top 🔝. as every time I click on a web novel regardless of what it seems to be the first few reviews are almost always five star with few exceptions to that being the author just doesn't have very many reviews. I think a lot of the reviews on this site are posted by the site itself. because if you look closely at authors who have a lot of reviews you'll notice the same users posted multiple reviews and they say the exact same thing copy and pasted which is usually random text of nothing with a five star review with no explanation about what they like so much about the story. these reviews tend to build up and boost the stories rating and as a result undeservingly pushing them up in the rankings.
IRAS? quien es? me podrias pasar el link de su cuenta, realmente no se quien es pero segun tu es muy bueno, hace fanfics de naruto o algo asi?
BingeFics:this fic was never there for the plot, it's just a crack fic trying to br comedic. that's it. and don't compare a fanfic with iras. that's a masterpiece. if you went in hoping to see iras level comedy, you were bound to be disappointed. no fanfic ever could come close to iras. but if you can give any other example based on comedy naruto fanfic, do that. As for the rest, except for translation, nothing is under my control. and regarding that, you said we changed a few things which you didn't like. dude, i am pretty sure something's wrong with you if you liked the original part because the author has written some pretty bad stuff. and that is the only thing we omitted in this translation. also, last thing, don't comment about deleting the review. you're victimising yourself and showing that we usually delete review. well, no. we have never deleted review unless they contained threats. also the review gets autodeleted by wn if you use banned words, even if it's in the comments by other users (though that rarely happens.)