good story and character. author build story is good. just the way author jump to each character to the other character is to bit build story, (I'm a little confused). But over all is okeyyyyy. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] Please keep updating. i love your story very much
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