This is good the only problem is the stability of updates and the grammar at the beginning, I also want to know will he get revenge on his parents and a reason why they left.
Zach_Lecher
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LIKEThanks for the review! I know stability is my worst problem but school is out so I guarantee at the very least a chapter a day for a month. As for family that won’t be for a while. Arthur has his own adventures to go on. Then for why they left him was because Arthur had no ability and earth was dying. Arthur didn’t have the power to survive outside of earth and his mother and sister couldn’t stay.