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The pacing is very fast but it seems to work well with this book. I hope in the future it slows down and we will be able to learn more about Arthur. I really like how evil he is and how his plans turn out. Only reason I dont give 5 stars is that the beginning explaining was sort of hard to grasp.

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I love it. it has a fast leveling set, but still has time for true story. it has a lot of characters that you think you would see in a novel made by someone who has been at it for years. characters: in the start it is about a boy who goes solo, then later it adds up to people who little by little get more important. I thoroughly enjoy it, I would recommend it to anyone who likes a good Fantasy System (P.S its System is very pure. it make you feel as if you see it in front of you. AKA great System.)

Rating it 5/5 after reading Chapter 7 Writing quality must be the best thing in this story. I didn't catch any lapses, or it was barely noticeable. But the style itself is refreshing. The author didn't put too much info in a paragraph and it was just write. Story development is zero to hero. After reading the MC got an ability and beat some fodder bully at the beginning, I would expect him to beat serious bad guy soon and instead of overpowering them, I would want to see him strategize more instead of overpowering them with given that he was the weakest. Character's personality has a vengeful fury undertone. The unique skill could be an OP in the long run. The author could also run into some loops so I hope this skill could have some limitations, unless of course if this is actually included in the whole plot. (Given the synopsis is about god giving his powers to human, I get the impression god is getting those powers back through him. LOL) World background, so far the ranking system is unique. Instead of Rank 1 being the strongest, the author did the opposite. The proper term would be Rating system. Like in chess, the higher your rating, the stronger you are. In this case, this is a good idea because it sets limitless possibilities in the appearance of stronger characters in the future. (Instead of the opposite where readers would usually look out for the top 10 ranks lol) Good work!

This is good the only problem is the stability of updates and the grammar at the beginning, I also want to know will he get revenge on his parents and a reason why they left.

This book is awesome. The way the mc is calculated and calm and the way his female friend(or maybe love interest i think) isnt bothersome and damsel in distress, she actually wants to help him and they have fun moments together. The mc will kill regardless of status, his ability is so op but also 👍 The grammar is top tier and you can barely find any errors. Author keep writing ive been waiting for you to update after chapter 44!!! PLEASEEEE this book is the one that actually isnt cliche and i absolutely love it. PLEASE UPDATE I NEEDMORE PLEASEE

Truth be told, I thought it was going to be in 3rd person POV. This is why the sudden change to 1st person caught me off guard. There are places to improve upon, I can see that the author is not used to 1st POV and is still using 3rd POV laws to write. Not that it's bad, it just sounds iffy to me. There are problems with grammar but the story is readable, that's what matters most. All in all, it was an interesting read. Keep up the good work.