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The world seems rich and alive. I like how it's paced rather slowly. It helps with setting the atmosphere and tone. It could be a bit shorter to make it a tad bit more digestible but it's solid. I'm keen to see how it develops.

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Thanks so much! Yes, I still have a bit to work on. I'll be sure to keep this in mind in the future development of my book, really appreciate it.

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