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Review Detail of Man_of_culture in One Piece: Road To Admiral

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Man_of_culture
Man_of_cultureLv42yrMan_of_culture

This definitely needs some editing... I recommend using Grammarly or something. The dialog between people seems kind of awkward, but the story is good. Just need some improvement in the grammar department, but otherwise a good ff.

One Piece: Road To Admiral

Alekzi

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Alekzi
AlekziAuthorAlekzi

I am finnish + self taught english, but i am improving slowly!

OnlyMesha
OnlyMeshaLv2OnlyMesha

Nice keep improving man

Alekzi:I am finnish + self taught english, but i am improving slowly!