I liked this story since the trial read period & it stayed that way, until the disappointing end. I don't know what situation the writer was facing but it's not fair to the readers to end it like that. I doubt that it was the intended end too because there were no hints before whatsoever. It just felt as if they wrote it like that because the story needed to end. While I do think the beginning and everything else is good (which is why I gave it the rating I did), I don't recommend it to others because of the end.
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LIKEI was I had found this story after it finished & saw reviews. It was one of my favorites at the time it was updating & the ending was bad - not just because of what happened but because there was no buildup to that.
Mollyfurs:I wish I read your comment before I started reading this lol