Review Detail of SirZed in Birth of The God-Defiant Archer

Item: Birth of The God-Defiant Archer
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SirZedLv142yrSirZed

Horrible. While the idea behind the story is sound, the grammar makes it hard to get into. I mean, how can you constantly go back and forth with he and she? And not realise that you're doing it?

Birth of The God-Defiant Archer

Revetaxn

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RevetaxnAuthorRevetaxn

I agree with you on this, my grammar is not very good.

2yr

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