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Review Detail of Asplaim in Villain Retirement

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Asplaim
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let us start this off disclaiming that these are my thoughts and are by no means meant to be derogatory towards the author nor say he should change anything. now with that out of the way lets start Writing quality considering the nature of this story there is only one real problem with the writing presented here mainly being the deplorable description of the side characters mainly revolving around their "features". other than that theirs tiny grammatical errors but that is alright and can be ignored. Story development a supervillian defeates the hero then goes to a superhero school simple but non the less an interesting concept that has come about in this novel. the way it progresses is quite entertaining. I would have thoroughly enjoyed it if not for the harem elements imbuing itself into the story and making it quite an unenjoyable read. Character design the characters a well fleshed out with them being written well enough to have a sense of individuality portrayed through the novel while also feeling "real". World background the problem with the world in this novel is that the only things really highlighted to us is that its a similar world to earth except with superheros the redeeming thing about this though is the author made the main heroine mega woman from another planet hence the rating. all in all good time waster if youre looking for something like that

Villain Retirement

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aikn
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i don't think the harem base in this one takes away from the story like the common harem tropes , the girls are useful to the plot and mc for the stuff he does imo

aikn
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fair enough

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