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oldaccokLv13yr
2021-10-21 17:28

Here is my opinion after chapter 59: This novel is among the bests in webnovel. I can guarantee it. The story and character designs are the very best. Correct me if I'm wrong but isn't Gary the best ever?! (readers will understand me). The writing quality needs to be improved. The author messed up the pronouns quite a few times... by that, I mean her/him pronouns only. Other than that. A more consistent update would be better. At least 1chp/ day, so webnovel standard is reached. That's all the flaw I can say. The characters in this novel are so fleshed out. You will feel the difference between this novel and every other novel on this website.

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ShimizuYoshidaLv3

Gary is a mystery

MafiaLv3

Gary has to be secretly op I swear, if he isn’ it would be disappointing.

ShimizuYoshida:Gary is a mystery
Jayden_Brown_1501Lv1

maybe.....

Mafia:Gary has to be secretly op I swear, if he isn’ it would be disappointing.
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