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Hello ate Ran! Here's my review for Waw. It's a very unique choice of plot for you to pick as a fellow-filipino writer. Although it was not the first kind of genre I read but it was the first Filipino - based story. I was proud to see places from the philippines included in the chapters. Also, you're way of conveying the first world was not very cringy. The way you altered Yanarym's version from the original plot of the book was awesome too. I would rate this 5 stars despite that it was a common romantic-genre story. Because the character and decisions of Yanarym interest me a lot. I just wonder how can you make her a lot more interesting to the rest of the worlds she leaping too.

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That was a really considerate review. I would keep in mind to pick some more interesting world for her. And I, myself is curious how would her character develop.