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2021-08-27 18:39

I was quickly gripped by this book. The mc is one that in all honesty you just want to hug, with all the stuff that she has been through. I cant wait to see the magic more fleshed out. Your writing quality’s flaws because of original language dont pop up often enough to distract from the story. Its a collection for me. One thing though, the title you have, though it explains the center of the story, can be passed off as any light novel doing something similar, while I personally think that this book has better content then most of the rest. A collection for me.

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