Grammar and punctuation do not exist. You will have to guess if a character is speaking out loud sometimes. Decent story. Needs an editor, badly.
Nfkmfh
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LIKESorry dude, unfortunately the good ones don't last and don't get finished. I have started too many that authors give up writing them for whatever crazy reasons. I don't even bother with the paid Asian ones since they can be found elsewhere. Like you, I'm still looking. Honestly, I'm getting sick of falling for the great reviews on this site.
SageOfSins:Yo bro, you have any 4-5 star goodies in ur reading list? I need some decent fic with atleast readable English language that some sort of sense instead of almost all the trashes on this site. So share?