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I've never been good at reviewing, so ill just get straight to the point. I wont recite the plot or anything. This novel could use some work. This is a pretty good novel but honestly it needs a lot to help it suceed. I enjoy the plot a lot but a lot of it, mainly the world building could use some work. Sorry for the slightly useless review, but salutations author, I hope you contenue this story
This Clueless Hero
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Haha, it's definitely not useless, and thank you for the review. This is actually my first novel, one that I used to learn how to write properly and get a feel for how a plot progresses as you write. I don't plan on dropping this novel, but chaps might be a little sparse in the future as I want to focus on my "The Laughing Swordsman". I feel that novel has been the result of my learning which I am more confident about. Not to mention, it's a lot more interesting, lol.