Review Detail of Vryaer in (WILL REWRITE) The Being of Shadows

This was a nice idea and good for a outline but this shouldn't have been posted like this. I don't want to give too much criticism solely because this is just an outline for how to flesh out the story later. The plot development as of chapter 10 should have been around chapter 150 minimum given that they were all around the same length. I hope to see this story reposted sometime so I can see it's true potential fulfilled.