Review Detail of ThisNovelSucksBro in Sasuke Shippuden
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No plot progression in the almost 40 chapters, MC is still a child and whilst he was gaining a decent amount of strength the author decides to reverse-nerf the MC and now everybody who was average-level is kage-level and everybody who was kage-level is god-level. The one redeeming thing was Mikoto and Kushina being in the harem but the Author changed his mind mid chapter about that too so yeah. ------- Should you waste your time reading this sad attempt of a plot with an indecisive author behind the wheel I wish you the best of luck in keeping your brain cells.
Sasuke Shippuden
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Hi there, thanks for the comment though. Even I know that the pace of this book is super slow compared to other fanfics, and I have noticed and I am working on it. I am just a newbie author trying to write something that fellow fans of Naruto will love and enjoy, although I haven't done a very good job, there are still others who like the story despite it's current slow pace. Also I would like to clarify that the character who is stronger than his original counter part has an explanation for getting so strong and didn't just get there on a whim. And the circumstances than warranted his growth would be revealed in the later chapters. Plus any other character that would be stronger will have a good reason for doing so, and the #overpoweredMc tag in this books still stands. Anyway, I hope you pardon my mistakes and give this book a chance, please(^^)...Thanks , ,...
The slow pace isn't the problem and don't get me wrong I don't hate or dislike you simply because I dislike your novel, I gave it countless chances but there is absolutely no development going on. I'm sure you can even see me in the comments praising the novel in the first few chapters before you started becoming indecisive and random and whilst I'm aware that you're making the villains stronger for a reason it still leaves a bad taste in my mouth. On top of this how can "fellow fans of naruto" enjoy this novel when you keep changing everything that is Naruto? First the Kushina and Mikoto thing you glossed over, second the overpowering of villains which will just drag out what we already know will happen, third the lack of development in plot beside the twin obviously planning to come back as an antagonist and finally the spam of abilities only for him to NOT USE THEM AND STILL BE WEAK IN COMPARISON TO OTHERS. --- You're a noob author and I respect that however what I can't respect is the fact that in 40 chapters you've done nothing and changed your mind countless times, I read novels primarily for the harem so removing those two (Mikoto and Kushina) was a turn off but I liked where you were heading none the less so I persisted and just shrugged it off only for you to make no progress in like 34 chapters bro?!?!
clonevaden:Hi there, thanks for the comment though. Even I know that the pace of this book is super slow compared to other fanfics, and I have noticed and I am working on it. I am just a newbie author trying to write something that fellow fans of Naruto will love and enjoy, although I haven't done a very good job, there are still others who like the story despite it's current slow pace. Also I would like to clarify that the character who is stronger than his original counter part has an explanation for getting so strong and didn't just get there on a whim. And the circumstances than warranted his growth would be revealed in the later chapters. Plus any other character that would be stronger will have a good reason for doing so, and the #overpoweredMc tag in this books still stands. Anyway, I hope you pardon my mistakes and give this book a chance, please(^^)...Thanks , ,...
True..even mc is dumb and gets nerf..as long harem has waifus.. and Kushina and mikoto is top tier waifus.. thanks for letting me know..i won't waste my time..or get deceived just cuz it has a lot good ratings
ThisNovelSucksBro:The slow pace isn't the problem and don't get me wrong I don't hate or dislike you simply because I dislike your novel, I gave it countless chances but there is absolutely no development going on. I'm sure you can even see me in the comments praising the novel in the first few chapters before you started becoming indecisive and random and whilst I'm aware that you're making the villains stronger for a reason it still leaves a bad taste in my mouth. On top of this how can "fellow fans of naruto" enjoy this novel when you keep changing everything that is Naruto? First the Kushina and Mikoto thing you glossed over, second the overpowering of villains which will just drag out what we already know will happen, third the lack of development in plot beside the twin obviously planning to come back as an antagonist and finally the spam of abilities only for him to NOT USE THEM AND STILL BE WEAK IN COMPARISON TO OTHERS. --- You're a noob author and I respect that however what I can't respect is the fact that in 40 chapters you've done nothing and changed your mind countless times, I read novels primarily for the harem so removing those two (Mikoto and Kushina) was a turn off but I liked where you were heading none the less so I persisted and just shrugged it off only for you to make no progress in like 34 chapters bro?!?!