Review Detail of musama_mwaba in The Invincible Corruption Manual
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the plot idea is fine but the progression from then on is sh*t. like that's not even enough you also add bad grammar, I endured 42 chapters of a story that doesn't make sense but adding a the little girl kinda just made me crash, it like you have so many ideas but don't know how to put them together like is till don't know we're the corruption in the title is in the storyline, you just gave a half assed explanation and left it at that.Try to reboot the story and ask for some help from people if it's hard to write.. but it's a story with alot of potential especially the dragons and all..
The Invincible Corruption Manual
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omg, grammar, seriously. Look at the English you have just written here. I am speechless. Alright, cool cool, my grammar is so bad. Hahaha... are you happy now? 2 star seriously, wow! So, you want me to explain every details of the story within 42 chapters. Alright, your highness, this is not possible. It's is a long novel theme. Everything will come into a large picture later on. what is so wrong about bringing a child here? It's a journey story after all. Yep, for your information. I usually removed bad reviews. But, not from now onwards. Feel free to write any review you like to write. I am totally cool. If you want me to explained about Corruption in the title, then okay I will do that, corruption : what is it? is it a good thing or bad thing? No, we all are looking in the wrong way. Corruption is everything. Everything, we see, touch, smell, feel, they are all corruption. It is neither a good nor bad thing after all. It is just our limited point of view that we see the Corruption Dao as a bad things. hmm, life is also another law of corruption Dao after all. Thanks for the review man. Have a good day.