Hard to read. Had to drop at chapter 1. The chapter is full of metaphors/colorfull descriptions of unnecessary things. Feels like the chapter is extended 3x just to have more words. Almost everything has a lot of extra descriptive or metaphorical words attached to it. I know i'm not making a lot of sense, just read ch1 and you will see how it's full of Shakespeare. cringe tbh, it's so overdone. A couple of times it's nice and gives the story more life, but here it's just EVERYWHERE and ALL THE TIME.... a chore to read. You would have to legitimately PAY me to read it.
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