Review Detail of Mel_Aniv in Journey to the land of the Little Ones

Item: Journey to the land of the Little Ones
Rating: 5

Review detail

Mel_AnivLv42yrMel_Aniv

The chapters were long per say. All in all, it was a nice read. With a slow start to build up the story, it was enjoyable. Though perfectionists will surely react to your grammar. Well not me, haha 😂 It was okay and you have your own style of writing. Polish it more and you will surely discover it in the future! Good luck on Spirity and I hope you will get what you deserve, Movie? TV series? name it! 😁

Journey to the land of the Little Ones

Megan_Jean_Forest

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Megan_Jean_ForestAuthorMegan_Jean_Forest

Thank you very much for your review! For the grammar mistakes: I am sorry, but I am not a native english speaker so they are more or less unavoidable. But I try to improve and write with as few mistakes as possible. I am reading your works and I hope my mistakes will vanish in no time :). What I would like is an animation series and an app game, so I am trying really hard!

2yr

Mel_AnivLv4Mel_Aniv

Yeah! keep it up! you can do it! will cheer for your success! 👍

Megan_Jean_Forest:Thank you very much for your review! For the grammar mistakes: I am sorry, but I am not a native english speaker so they are more or less unavoidable. But I try to improve and write with as few mistakes as possible. I am reading your works and I hope my mistakes will vanish in no time :). What I would like is an animation series and an app game, so I am trying really hard!
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2yr