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2021-09-21 20:01

A romace comedy with a light tone. I feel i can bond with the characters after just a three chapters, because they are easy to relatable. The novel though can use some little editing and it's be smooth to read. Keep going author, story must be told.

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thanks. That's why I'm trying to make vol.2 more meaningful. 😊

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