Review Detail of Theogonia in DanMachi: Ascension of the White Emperor

Bro I deducted 1 point from the story development, some strange things are happening because there were some oddities according to danmachi (eg bell's aunt died 8-10 years before alfia bell was born d: and how is eina alfia 14 years old when she was alive and a great war was going on : D is normally 19 years old anyway.But I liked your story very much, I look forward to the continuation :)