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Dark_crow
Dark_crowLv43yr
2021-12-19 22:46

Awesome story.The starting and the consecutive progreesion upto date is very good though the interaction with the story characters are quite lacking(as he just arrived at orario).Hope MC has some nice interaction with the girls in future along with some action. Thank you.

DanMachi: Ascension of the White Emperor

Pie_Daddy
4.6
34 Chs

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Pie_Daddy
Pie_DaddyAuthor

Thank you for the review. Also, I assure you. There will be more interactions with the characters in the future.

3yr
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Pie_Daddy
Pie_DaddyAuthor

I know it isn't perfect and may contain some grammatical errors but please do enjoy. 🙂👍 I know it isn't perfect and may contain some grammatical errors but please do enjoy. 🙂👍 I know it isn't perfect and may contain some grammatical errors but please do enjoy. 🙂👍 I know it isn't perfect and may contain some grammatical errors but please do enjoy. 🙂👍

3yr

Bapabooey
BapabooeyLv15

Honestly I wasn't planning on writing a review, but Author-San requested us to write reviews if we like the book. Currently, I'm very invested in this book. The story is great, I can't wait for new chapters, for me the chapters aren't long enough because I just want to read more. Don't get me wrong, I'm not rating this as 5 just because the Author, I really do think this book is a great book so far. Don't give up, don't let the people who give you bad reviews get to you. You won't be able to please everybody, but you don't have to. Just continue doing what you feel is right for your story and your plot. It is your story. If those who don't like it want something different, they can go find a different book somewhere else that suits their tastes better. No need to be such a downer and make another great novel be dropped because of their own interests getting in the way. Keep it up Author! You're doing great!

3yr
Kyle_Buschmann
Kyle_BuschmannLv4

Good start of the story and can't wait to see what path he'll take with the system at later levels. Hopefully he gets with Loki I haven't seen many fanfics have her in it and I feel she is a good choice due to her divinity and him being an emperor.I can't wait to see how strong and see if he just dominates the gods at one point then traveling to a new world this book has alot of potential!! Can't wait for more.

3yr
CopyPaste1
CopyPaste1Lv13

if you wanna read about a beta Mc who listen to his sugar momma, this novel is for you! ...... .... ...................... ....... .....

3yr
Sommerscave
SommerscaveLv14

***Review AS of chapter 4*** The Idea isnt New but has its own unique Spin which i Like. And to be honest when did i ever have a MC that didn't Know about His world. Very rarely so have a cute Ais author.

3yr
Carlos_Balbizan
Carlos_BalbizanLv1

the writing is good and all, but his backstory is really bad... he died because he was cheated on by his girlfriend with the rich man and the henchmen killed him, really? truck-kun was more original. and this goddess who looks more like a teenager? I can't read beyond cap 5, in the moral (in my language, this sentence makes sense because I'm using the translator to write)...

3yr
Nepu_Nep
Nepu_NepLv4

Mc Background done alright, lots of Fanfics where mc good karma and given rewards for karma. very common but this is one of the few fanfics where effort was actually done for the background of Mc there is also the transition from mc death to reincarnation, usually it goes Here are your wishes then goodbye. But you actually made the ROB a goddess and a lover, it's not new but not the same old boring Take your wishes and leave. still 5 chaps so thats all I can talk about as for this FanFic to become a multiverse it is very likely so Author should be careful in which content to add in this fanfic cuz multiverse types are likely to get tiring in the long run, tho if you enjoy what you will write then it might be fine.

3yr
ArmedBaton
ArmedBatonLv3

Updates are a bit slow, but everyone has their personal life so np, good quality as well look forward to seeing more in the future. Good luck author👍

3yr
drk123x_
drk123x_Lv4

*sigh* we need more . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ..... .. . . . . . . . . . . . . .

3yr
MrSheta
MrShetaLv10

Good story, I liked the mc and the goddess ... Although there are sadder and more miserable backstories, of which the goddess could have been surprised, it was passable ... The only thing that complicates me so far (ch. 4) , It is the lack of chapters xD .... I want to continue reading: (!!! But I will be supporting this novel and hoping that you do not abandon it, as most authors do on this page xD ...

3yr
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